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Monday 17 October 2011

Storyboard + Animatic + Feedback


Scene No. 1
Camera Shot. Jump cuts across the bench // Pan across body.
This is my idea for my opening scene. A man will awake form a bench after passing out from a really good night. I hope to use blur effects throughout the video so that it gives the impression of him trying to remember the night.


Scene No. 2
Camera Shot. Close up on face / props such as empty cans / cigarette packet.
This second frame will be when he gets up from the bench and puts his head in his hands. This will either represent that he is tired. he has a hangover or he is trying to remember the night.


Scene No. 3
Camera Shot. POV shots // shots of scenery 
This third frame represents the man having a cigarette as an attempt to wake himself up. This will also be the build up to the droop of the song where the bass comes in.



Scene No. 4 / 5 / 6
Camera Shot. Fast paced action shots // slow motion
These next three frames and the main part of the video will be of town and inside of clubs. Ideas for these shots I have are the man and his mates doing shots at the bar, dancing / raving in the center of the dance floor and maybe get kicked out the club.


Scene No. 7
Camera Shot. Close up // depth of field
This frame is just an idea i have of a close up of the man holding face, with a heavy blur effect.


Scene No. 8
Camera Shot. match on action shot // over shoulder
This frame will be an interesting one to shoot as i will have the man look at himself in the mirror and you can see half of his body out of focus, but the main focus is on his facial expression in the mirror.


Scene No. 9
Camera Shot. Pan below bench to ipod
The final shot for my music video will be a a static shot of the man walking away from the bench, and then it will cut to a downward pan shot underneath the bench, where an ipod is playing the song that i am using for the music video.

This is the animatic for the above storyboard.

Feedback
- have fast paced shots to match the pace of the music - perhaps have it slower at the beginning, then when the music gets faster and more upbeat, change the style of the shots to much faster and to create more movement
3/2/2012 10:01 AMView Responses
Maybe some more shots of the actor could be included
3/2/2012 10:00 AMView Responses
Perhaps more different angles. The opening is a little slow, maybe you could add more to it.
3/2/2012 9:59 AMView Responses
mine
3/2/2012 9:59 AMView Responses
cuts need to be fast to work with the tempo of the music. possibly more shots of lyrics being sung.
3/2/2012 9:59 AMView Responses
Maybe have faster cuts to match the song better, good narrative
3/2/2012 9:59 AMView Responses
Will need to move a little faster in the real video than it does in the animatic. Be sure not to make it overly repetitive, possibly put a small story-line into each of the two parts of the video, what he does once he wakes up (not just have a cigarette) and maybe move on to what happened after being out at the clubs in the evening.
3/2/2012 9:58 AMView Responses
Interesting narrative, club shots fit the music genre. Maybe develop and use more filler shots, to break up the dance bit. 
3/2/2012 9:57 AMView Responses
I think faster shots would work better with the up tempo song. The locations look good for the song and i like the theme idea
3/2/2012 9:56 AMView Responses

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